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Peer Review for Contrast Paragraph
For Neilly
Outline for Peer Review
Contrast Paragraph
“My Life Before and After”
Format (5 points)
Is the paragraph double spaced?
Yes, paper fulfills requirement.
Is the paragraph typed in Times New Roman, 12 font?
Yes, paper fulfills requirement.
Is it written in “paragraph form”?
Yes, paper fulfills requirement.
Did the student include his/her name and the title, “Contrast Paragraph”, in the upper right-hand corner?
.Yes, paper fulfills requirement.
Organization (50 points)
Are there 20 sentences?
No, has eighteen sentences.
Did the student follow the assigned paragraph format?
Yes
Sentence 1: Topic sentence? Yes
Sentence 2: Point one/Subject One? Both were stated
Sentences 3 and 4: Two details about point one/subject one? Both were stated
Sentence 5: Point one/Subject Two? Yes
Sentences 6 and 7: Two details about point one/subject two? Yes, the author does include two detail sentences
Sentence 8: Point Two/Subject One? Yes, he provided a point and subject
Sentences 9 and 10: Two details about point two/subject one? he did provide two details and point.
Sentence 11: Point Two/Subject Two? He gave point two and subject two, he followed the format and didnt go off topic.
Sentences 12 and 13: Two details about point two/subject two? He has both points and subject.
Sentence 14: Point Three/Subject One? he gave a point and subject and there were some points that could of been left out.
Sentences 15 and 16: Two details about point one? hes proovided two details of point one “before and after”
Sentence 17: Point Three/Subject Two? Contrast paragraph is good. he speaks on how it was hard to adjust to americas lifestyle.
Sentences 18 and 19: Two details about point three/subject two? he just need to add more details on here points.
Sentence 20: Concluding statement? concluding statement was present
Does the topic sentence